Sunday, September 8, 2013

Story Sunday: Farla and the Flannel Nightgown



               
I wrote this story in third grade. It was a story in which we had to use all our spelling words. It’s significant to me because it was my teacher’s simple comment on my returned paper that seemed to spark my love of writing for good. He wrote: “Beautiful story, Teresa.” I hope you think so too. (And keep in mind that I was a third-grader. :))

Farla and the Flannel Nightgown

                Once there lived a very poor family named the Criptons.
                It was almost Christmas back in old Kentucky where the Criptons lived.
                The Criptons had a daughter and a son. The daughters’ name was Farla, but the son was twenty-three years old and they still hadn’t decided on a name for him.
                Anyhow, Farla had always wanted a flannel nightgown so she could walk past all the others with her nose in the air and say, “I’ll bet you didn’t  get one of these for Christmas.” Every Christmas she would hope against hope that they had a flannel nightgown hidden somewhere in the house. This attitude bothered the Criptons. They were afraid Farla would grow up to be selfish and picky.
                That night, while they were all asleep, there was an awful clatter. It awoke Farla.
                “It’s alright,” said a soft voice. It was the voice of the Clumsy Flannel Fairy, for she was the one who had caused that awful racket.
                Farla said, “You probably brought me some mittens or a blossom, like everyone else, and not a flannel nightgown.”
                “No, no,” said the fairy; “but if you want a flannel nightgown you must work for it.”
                “If that’s what it takes,” said Farla; then the fairy flew off.
                Farla worked and worked every day until that night when everyone impatiently waited to open their presents. Farla was asked to open hers first. She did, and it was a flannel nightgown! She was so happy she could have kissed the fairy. She was nowhere in sight, but in her heart Farla was thankful.
The End

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